Finally done! (I don't even want to think about how long this took °____°) My first comic with actual words and those silly whatnots. Also, now I remember why I don't make comics... and don't draw Trixie much. Oh well.
people say bread always fa;;s jelly side down, it originated from a rage comic, not the phrase, the frequent use did though. usually signifying the unfortunate event of the crud on the floor getting all over the jelly and you having to redo the sandwich.
so since he is covered in jelly, the jelly side landed face up.
"…hold tools with your frog and sole." I had to think for a minute about what that phrase could possibly mean. Then I looked closer at the way Pinkie was actually holding the knife, and realized it was because I'm not familiar with terminology regarding equine anatomy.
i can understand that i am having less time for DA myself.
but honestly there are some great gems in here (among the big ones) including how the eyebrows clump up to be a more realist yet nod to the original design.
really a few small points is that for some reason the rooms feel a little lifeless (maybe some more key/misalius props maybe,i seems to lack "posonal touches" (this is party pony with more posoality then her five freinds (maybe even ponyvill)combined!)) the family frame seems to jut off a little and it seems odd that there is family photo of her sister still fillys without her in it? (also ponsonaly i would argue more photos including a more up to date one with her sisters as mares (i really do not follow that weird head cannon other bronys get with her being disowned) her father is smiling nice touch)
some materials seem not to blend naturally (the jam on the cloth) however the shading and hair is great. and the story most entertaining.
thank you for replying to my message you are most wellcome
hahaha xD Oh this had me chuckling quite a while Panel 6 is definitely my favourite Jellypony being so happy to be used on Pinkie's sandwich and Pinkie being "Not you again... Go away..." while Trixie is taking serious notes XD And that Pinkie is proud over herself in the last panel for obvious reasons (I've NEVER succeded with dropping my sandwich with the right side up...)